Some people believe school children should be given multiple short vacations while others believe they should get one long vacation. Give advantages of both and your point of view.
Vacations are considered to be beneficial to humans in many different ways. A number of people advocate that a short vacation should be given to the children going to school every now and then. However, others say that a single but long-spanned vacation should be granted. This essay will examine merits of both opinions and explain why I believe that the latter view is more beneficial to the young growing minds.
The supporters of frequent short-term vacations claim that this helps in enhancing their results by regularly rejunevating the mind, body, and soul of students. Most of the schools have a monthly assessment to evaluate the knowledge gained by the pupils. Thus, they have a non-stop learning process. Giving them several small breaks can act as a stress-buster and refresh their minds which will improve their academic performances.
Others, however, myself included, highlight that a single long-termed vacation has many constructive ripples in terms of having time to travel and exploring other countries and to follow or acquire new hobby during this free time. To enunciate, unlike short holidays, students can plan to visit and stay in different countries which may attribute to learn new heritage and culture or even pick up a local dialect. In addition to this, it also provides them the opportunity to follow their passion. For instance, a child may join a dance class for a month in the leisure time learning different styles of dancing. Hence the blessings brought by a long time off enrich students in multiple ways.
To reiterate, many small vacations relax a student in numerous ways. However, I think, a single long holiday helps in developing the young mind by giving them a chance to learn new cultures and follow their passion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, then, thus, for instance, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09278350515 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68544773311 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591065292096 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0987872335 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207888843901 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684944019769 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778153893424 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127120310352 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119360228692 0.056905535591 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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