There is no future for public transport, because travelling by car is so much more convenient.
Nowadays, most of the families have their own car to go office or any vacation trip. They feels that it is more flexible rather than taking a bus or train. But, still public transport is mandatory at some times. In my opinion, I strongly disagree that it is no where in future as well. Despite the advantages, I believe they have a negative effect on our lives. In this essay I will pen down probable reasons with relevant examples to elaborate further.
Firstly, when we plan for long distances either with a bus or train which could be the right choice to travel for safety reasons. Few roads which are really dangerous to drive. At that time, driving with experts are needed rather than self-driving. Secondly, Traffic get increased if every one choose car to travel in the city. Right now, most of the cities are facing the same issue. So, people have to take public transport for at least a week days.Finally, pollution also get increased due to large number of vehicles in the city.
However, driving in a car is most comfort and convenient to travel anywhere. Nowadays, we can get the car in a budget price as well.
In conclusion, we definitely need a public transport in future as well. I believe that public transport is preferable when we travel for long distance or office. Other times, we can use our own vehicles. The government have to declare some set of rules for people who is fully dependent on their own cars to reduce pollution, traffic.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 91, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'feel'
Suggestion: feel
...to go office or any vacation trip. They feels that it is more flexible rather than ta...
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Line 1, column 259, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...opinion, I strongly disagree that it is no where in future as well. Despite the ad...
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Line 3, column 452, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Finally
...blic transport for at least a week days.Finally, pollution also get increased due to la...
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Line 7, column 35, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'public transport'.
Suggestion: public transport
...l. In conclusion, we definitely need a public transport in future as well. I believe that publi...
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Line 7, column 305, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...who is fully dependent on their own cars to reduce pollution, traffic.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, still, well, at least, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1211.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67567567568 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52624747954 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583011583012 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5802422473 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.2777777778 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3888888889 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27040438196 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733136650178 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657958209854 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15520208541 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369522513249 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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