In some countries in Europe, some children from the age of 11 or 13 go to schools to learn more practical skills that will help them get a job. Other children stay in schools which provide a more general academic education.What should schools do to prepar

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Few Countries in Europe , Teenagers at the age of 11 or 13 to imp...
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...chools that will useful to getting a job . Other side , few students just have the...
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...ill useful to getting a job . Other side , few students just have their general ac...
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...demic education for marks. In my opinion , Schools should take care on this , guid...
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...inion , Schools should take care on this , guide them properly to improve practica...
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...ctical skills for the world of work. At the age of 10 plus , children have gr...
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...orld of work. At the age of 10 plus , children have great grasping power . Th...
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...lus , children have great grasping power . They can able to understand quickly eac...
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... able to understand quickly each subject . So , rather than focusing them on acad...
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... to understand quickly each subject . So , rather than focusing them on academic ...
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...each subject . So , rather than focusing them on academic subjects , Schools have...
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...than focusing them on academic subjects , Schools have to teaches in practical wa...
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... on academic subjects , Schools have to teaches in practical way. Teenagers has to know...
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... each subject's useful in real life . So that they could have more interest a...
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...re interest and passion on the subjects.Thats the way it will be useful them get a jo...
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...re interest and passion on the subjects.Thats the way it will be useful them get a jo...
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...he way it will be useful them get a job.Because , Any company is looking the candidates...
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...it will be useful them get a job.Because , Any company is looking the candidates w...
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...didates which have good practical skills , not looking their academic percentage. ...
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...are not able find a skilled people. Schools have to conduct workshops , oral...
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... Schools have to conduct workshops , oral test and internships twice in stud...
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...rnships twice in students academic year.Oral test will useful for children to improv...
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...ll useful to know the basic work culture . Internships will improve the real work ...
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...s will improve the real work experience.In my schooling , I did lot of workshops ...
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...the real work experience.In my schooling , I did lot of workshops and attended mu...
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... work experience.In my schooling , I did lot of workshops and attended much confe...
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... , I did lot of workshops and attended much conferences which will improve a practi...
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...ferences which will improve a practical skills. On this regard, I will give to credit ...
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...hose things. That will help to get a job , I am not facing any difficulty in my wo...
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...ot facing any difficulty in my work. In conclusion , schools have to take a r...
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...ifficulty in my work. In conclusion , schools have to take a responsibility t...
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... to do minor changes in education system , which I mentioned above. It will be rea...
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...ful for them to improve practical skills that will useful them to get a job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, as to, in conclusion, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98601398601 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.822122458 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503496503497 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.8223140348 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8823529412 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8235294118 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35294117647 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297024017593 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935698676525 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737605055818 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200153171247 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461850248229 0.056905535591 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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