Write a letter to your friend, who has just moved to a new house regarding a gift that you want to send him
1. what you will send as a gift
2. why you have chosen it
3. How you will send
Dear Anna,
I hope you are fine, it’s such a long time since i saw you. Recently, i came to know from my aunt that you have bought a new house near shimmer lake and are going to shift there next month. I have bought a cupboard for you as a gift.
I am so delighted to find that you have ultimately got your dream house. However, as you have told me, the woodwork has not been completed, i have bought a huge cupboard for you. I bought it from Chiniot furniture shop, which is best re-known for their handy craft work and expert in the home furniture. The walls and front doors are made of the Oak from Gilgit and planks are made of the cedar wood. The cupboard depicts the art work of the dynasty of Mughal era. The cupboard is divided into separate portion for clothes; children’s toys: shoes: accessories like jewelry, watches, scarves, socks, glasses- and what not. This will prove to be the ultimate solution to save all personal stuff.
As there is a mirror inside the door, which has increased the delicacy of the object, so i have requested my uncle to drop it at your house by himself. So that such a special gift will not get damaged in any way by the vendor. I have told him your address. I assume you do not mind my deliberate step. He will be there tomorrow late afternoon.
Best wishes,
Saira
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 56, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... fine, it's such a long time since i saw you. Recently, i came to know from ...
^
Line 2, column 77, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... a long time since i saw you. Recently, i came to know from my aunt that you have...
^
Line 4, column 466, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... art work of the dynasty of Mughal era. The cupboard is divided into separate porti...
^^^
Line 6, column 153, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...le to drop it at your house by himself. So that such a special gift will not get damage...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 345, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... will be there tomorrow late afternoon. Best wishes, Saira
^^^^^
Line 9, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...late afternoon. Best wishes, Saira
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1085.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 246.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41056910569 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32227343987 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605691056911 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.671661159 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.8125 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.375 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.9375 4.34317383033 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265858906078 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856222754516 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756064731509 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196343433176 0.12726935374 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551953445246 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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