We live today in an electronic information age. It is easier to be connected by technology yet many people seem no closer to feeling happy in t heir lives. Discuss
As the century draws to close, most people around the globe are equipped with latest gadgets and information processing systems. Although these advancements have made lives easier, this progress has not yet made the mankind happy. Therein, a paradigm shift in the usage of these modern technologies should be enforced.
Living in a fast paced world expects people to have a serene experience. Technology makes life straightforward, owing to the easy access to information, communication and better living standards. This digital transformation has helped human beings in every facets of their life.
However, this can be erroneous for myriad reasons. For instance, in this modern era humans tend to enjoy the companionship of electronic devices rather than their same species. Moreover, this digitalised age consumes most of the peoples time on social networking sites.
In my opinion, when people indulge themselves in technologies, they forget to spend time in solitude and to relax. This in turn creates stress and a sense of not gratified gusto. Not only these advancements keeps oneself addicted to it, but it also acts a parasite which controls their life.
As a whole, it can be concluded that technologies to a great extent can emotionally and psychologically drain a person if not carefully handled. Therefore a paradigm shift in the usage of electronic information should be adopted by individuals and society for their better functioning both intellectually and emotionally.
- Climate change is now an accepted threat to our planet, but there is not enough political action to control excessive consumerism and pollution. Do you agree? 78
- Some people feel that the legal age at which people can marry should be at least 21.To what extent do you agree or disagree?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 78
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- We live today in an electronic information age. It is easier to be connected by technology yet many people seem no closer to feeling happy in t heir lives. Discuss 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
...st people around the globe are equipped with latest gadgets and information processing syst...
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Line 9, column 146, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...rain a person if not carefully handled. Therefore a paradigm shift in the usage of electr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in my opinion, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43776824034 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11421821643 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643776824034 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5419666252 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6428571429 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161040173717 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509805715207 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0281582181522 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847361102969 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386223709385 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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