The tabular chart depicts the information about on buyer expenditure on various product in five different nations in 2002 .the data has been calibrated in percentage.
At the first glance,it is clearly seen that,in Ireland ,people send more on food/drinks/tobacco rather than clothing/footwear and there was a negligible proportion of expenditure on leisure/education. Next,the percentage of spend on food/drinks/tobacco was more as compared on leisure and education in Italy.
Shifting towards remaining information of the data,in Spain the most popular spend on food/drinks/tobacco was 18.8%. After that,there was a 5% difference between peopleexpenditure on clothing/footwear and leisure/education.
Moreover,the percentage of purchaser expenditure by food/drinks/tobacco and clothing/footwear was 32.14% and 6.63% respectively . Further,there was a minor difference between the percentage of buyer spend by clothing/footwear and leisure/education leisure/education in Turkey
Overall,the maximum percentage of buyer spend on food/drinks/tobacco in turkey and the minimum percentage of purchaser expenditure on leisure/education in Spain.
- Many different countries have most shops and products as the same Some consider it a positive development whereas others consider it negative Discuss both sides and give your opinion 67
- Some businesses prohibit smoking in any of their offices Some governments have banned smoking in all public places Do you agree or disagree that this is the right course of action Give reasons for your opinion 73
- Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants Why do you think people waste food What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away 84
- Memorization of information by of request reception crote learning plays a vital in most education system does the successful of the method outweigh its limitations 56
- People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems?Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns? 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.63333333333 4.92477711251 135% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.79068471711 2.65546596893 180% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546666666667 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.45097560976 138% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.2973689994 43.030603864 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.142857143 112.824112599 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 5.23603664747 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 1.69756097561 1060% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118707800159 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684994414407 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619326686564 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867382493518 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640023707422 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 13.2329268293 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 16.32 61.2550243902 27% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.3012195122 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 21.17 11.4140731707 185% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.0658536585 190% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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