Dear Sir,
I am writing to you in response to the advertisement on News Daily on 5th Sep for a Cooking teacher in you college.
I would like to teach cooking Indian cuisines, I have a degree in hotel management where I majored in Indian food which includes entree, savory dishes, and dessert. After completing my course I also worked in some five star hotels like J.W Marriot and Holiday Inn. I also acquired a teaching certificate and have hands on experience in teaching in a school.
I moved to Vancouver last year and have been rendering courses in different community colleges near my area. This course will start will basic cutting and chopping which will progress eventually to cooking full meal. Moreover, I also have my special recipes for homemade spices which I would love to share with the students. Besides, being a mother of four, I love spending time with children.
Hope to receive a positive reply from you.
Yours Sincerely,
Jane Doe.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...des entree, savory dishes, and dessert. After completing my course I also worked in s...
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Line 5, column 239, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: W
... worked in some five star hotels like J.W Marriot and Holiday Inn. I also acquire...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 807.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89090909091 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5788288285 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660606060606 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0625800492 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260756283778 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834342395722 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695769618482 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150285873903 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079711153207 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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