The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to spoken globally. What are the advantage and disadvantaged to having one language in the world?
It is thought by some people who English, which is now the most widely spoken language in the world, may one day predominate over all other languages and result in their disappearance. Having one language would be beneficial for the understanding between other countries as well as in the economic growth but it will also have some drawbacks.
According to the first school of thoughts, there are some advantages of speaking one language. Firstly, learning only the English as beneficial for the people as this language is accepted by all other nations because this language is important in any area of domain. So, having one language will be helpful in improving the understanding between not only many countries but all people throughout the world which would promote the learning, the flow of information and ideas. Secondly, speaking only the one language would enhance the economic growth. With all people speaking the same language there will be less barriers and therefore trade would flourish between nations, resulting in healthier world economy.
Moving towards the drawbacks of having one language. The prime one is that, when the people have same language so it gets the result of disappearing of other languages and people would loss their culture and diversity of the nation as with the different cultures of the different countries gives the unique identity to the most of the nation so as a one language in all the countries result in their lost. Further, it would result in the collapse of tourism because when all the countries have same languages and cultures so tourist would not attract towards the other countries and it would give the result of reducing the popularity of tourism as most countries depends on tourism economy so it would affect the economic growth as well.
To conclude, after a many thoughts and deliberation it is true to say, that speaking only one language have most of the positive views but also it would have some negative impacts . So people should learn English as it is an international language but they should not forget the significance of their own language.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1768.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02272727273 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65524791086 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.420454545455 0.561755894193 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.7000886861 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.333333333 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357552251214 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167060831527 0.084324248473 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650352613795 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267717270728 0.151304729494 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646510848548 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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