The trend followed these days is to possess the latest gadgets, be it smartphones, desktops or other technology such as gaming units and so on. While it is good to keep ourselves up to date with the new technology, in my opinion it is not ideal nor is it beneficial to purchase the latest devices as and when they are sold in the market.
The main aim of software companies these days is to outsmart each other by developing better & upgraded technology. Smart phone companies such as Apple & Samsung release newer and better versions every couple of months. Upgraded models mean better picture quality, smarter apps, etc. These phones, desktops, etc make our lives easier and exciting however for a limited period of time. When a new version of the gadget is released, we are tempted to possess it. What we fail to realize is that most of the basic features of the new product is similar to the older version. In our attempt to get hold of the latest technology we are spending our hard earned money on unnecessary luxuries.
Secondly, we as human beings tend to become more materialistic and competitive with our fellow friends & colleagues in a race to attain these new products. With such attitude, we are setting a bad example to the future generation who would assume that in order to succeed we need to possess these latest technologies.
In conclusion, I would like to state that possessing new and latest versions of various gadgets & technology will not make us any smarter. We need to widen our prospective and concentrate more on developing our skills and being best versions of ourselves.
- Some people believe that money is the most important factor for achieving happiness. However, others believe that happiness has nothing to do with money. Agree or disagree?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowle 56
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- In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care.Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?Gi 73
- You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter,• describe the si 73
- Why some people buy new phones, desktop or technology (latest devices)What is good or bad about it. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 370, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...sier and exciting however for a limited period of time. When a new version of the gadget is re...
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Line 7, column 223, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'being the best'.
Suggestion: being the best
...trate more on developing our skills and being best versions of ourselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82246376812 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68299396806 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590579710145 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1670106299 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.384615385 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163648131586 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549873279145 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045045426372 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0998736497394 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432019521903 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.