Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sport to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that volunteer work should become an obligatory part of high school programs. In my opinion, this development can be beneficial for youngsters in different ways.
First of all, community service can give teenagers the opportunity to gain work experience in different realms. Children try a variety of jobs and can find an interesting and suitable one for their future career. Teaching younger children, for instance, allows an adolescent to examine an educator's job and learn whether he wants to work with children as an adult or not. Indeed, this valuable experience may help youngsters to choose a life path after leaving school.
Secondly, public work enhances youngsters' social skills and physical health. Unfortunately, today many children spend their spare time watching TV or playing computer games. These activities are harmful to their fitness and lead to children's isolation. However, community work usually includes interaction with a lot of different people and require some physical activities. Therefore, it is a great way to keep young people fit and sociable.
Finally, volunteer work improves teenagers' perception of adulthood with its necessity to earn a living and teach them to spend money wisely. Also, young people might be encouraged to appreciate another person's work after learning how hard and important it may be. Undoubtedly, compulsory community service makes adolescents more mature and prepared for their adult lives.
In conclusion, I support the idea of making unpaid public work a compulsory task for high school pupils because it may give them useful work experience, improve their social skills and understanding of adulthood.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47892720307 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84820999432 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639846743295 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0107391389 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294371633016 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878293206371 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541741573926 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16476355746 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371454936609 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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