Some people say that protecting the environment is the governments responsibility. Others believe that every individual should be responsible for it.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Although, people differ in the opinion, it is the fact the saving our environment is a need of hour.
Some opine that governments should take the ownership in this regard others says that it is a responsibility of every individual. Without any prejudice, let us discuss both views in this essay. However, I believe that efforts of both governments and individuals are important and both have the shared responsibility of saving environment.
Let us first examine the reasons, why some people think that governments should take the responsibility of addressing the environmental problems. The main aim of the government is to work for the welfare of people and to provide them a better standard of living. The governments can make strict rules and regulations to prevent environmental damage. The governments should make industrial laws and instruct industries to use green source of energy and make waste treatment plants in their premises. Furthermore, governments can participate to take collective actions at international levels to control pollution and other environmental related problems for example rise in temperature, melting glaciers and scarcity of drinking water. Better exchange of technology and resources can be done to mitigate environmental problems.
On the other hand, efforts done at an individual level are equally important to save the environment. Individuals can reduce the use of vehicles and plastics in their daily life. People can promote the use of recycling of materials to reduce the waste production. Every individual can contribute to save environment by growing tress, saving water and by using solar energy.
To conclude, we can restate that efforts should be done at war footing levels to protect our environment, for which governments and individuals should share the responsibilities. It is rightly said that prevention is better than cure.
Sincere efforts must be done to save environment before it gets too late.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 351, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ations to prevent environmental damage. The governments should make industrial laws...
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Line 8, column 180, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...uals should share the responsibilities. As it is rightly said that prevention is b...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve environment before it gets to late.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41693811075 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18004072619 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524429967427 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4114920132 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8235294118 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0588235294 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23529411765 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321669014088 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966557943827 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689299556719 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158319847798 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0871590478097 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.86 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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