Formal education tends to restrain our minds and spirits rather than set them free.
As an educator, this topic is controversial to me. This context is also aired in late-night debate program of fox channel where major scholars did oppose this context. Now, one may ask why major scholars opposed this context? There are so many reasons to it but most notably formal education helps us to think beyond what we can not expect. Additionally, formal education is an education given under some education authority board. It wholly depends upon the curriculum adopted by the education authority. If the curriculum is varying as per the external environment, students are getting updated education which set them free to think about some theory. Thus, I disagree with this context.
first of all, I would like to point out that informal education does not provide any personal coach. It means, if I have a doubt in some topic of math then without a teacher(coach) I will not be able to find out the answer. Moreover, Coach does not provide the answer but provides the technique. For more clarification, let us look at the example of Mr Anand Kumar, professor of Math, he believes in informal education, however, it did not give you 100% result. the foremost characteristic of formal education is discipline. A student is not able to think beyond its capacity if he does not follow the discipline principles.
Secondly, a Training programme is a part of formal education, where Trainer gives the first instruction to their trainees to think freely. for clearance of doubts, Let us look at the metaphor of Institute of Company Secretaries of India. It is a prestigious institute which is focused on good corporate governance. A student may become a member of ICSI, after clearing 3 levels of programme conducted by ICSI itself. As per the curriculum of ICSI, a training programme of 15 months is compulsory for every student. The training programme helps the students to think practically and how to deal with a particular situation.
Finally, As per Albert Einstein, " Education is not the learning of facts but it is the training of the mind." Education is the process of facilitating learning or acquisition of knowledge, beliefs and skills. Education includes storytelling, teaching, training and research.
In conclusion, although informal education helps the students to think deeply on the various subject, however, such thinking may be on the wrong side, so these students need a mentor who helps them to tailor the thinking into the right side. As per Mr.Jacob, former professor of British council, formal education is just like a tailor who tailoring the thinking capacity of the students in the right mode
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2218.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 436.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0871559633 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89561109076 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52752293578 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 686.7 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.3938079509 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4166666667 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14347413941 0.243740707755 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412611137536 0.0831039109588 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555568658447 0.0758088955206 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0776022343118 0.150359130593 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472590235542 0.0667264976115 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 100.480337079 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.