Some people feel that it is necessary to test new medicines on animals,while other people feel that it is not fair on animals and not necessary.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , while
...emonstrate some new medicines on animals,while other people believe that it is not ess...
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Line 1, column 188, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...step to do on animals and it is not fai.i will discuss about both views and give ...
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Line 2, column 94, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...nes which has firstly tested on animals.However,it is essential for some experimental b...
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Line 2, column 101, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , it
...ch has firstly tested on animals.However,it is essential for some experimental base...
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Line 2, column 202, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...uired for some pharmaceutical medicines.The medicines has required some experimenta...
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Line 2, column 216, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'have', 'haven'.
Suggestion: have; haven
... pharmaceutical medicines.The medicines has required some experimental purposes whi...
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Line 2, column 292, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Meanwhile
...ses which is firstly to test on animals.Meanwhile,it has necessary of some experimental b...
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Line 2, column 301, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , it
... is firstly to test on animals.Meanwhile,it has necessary of some experimental base...
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Line 2, column 369, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...perimental bases because of it will not affect upon the humans and this is the reason behin...
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Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , there
...hind that experiment. On the other side,there are some factors which has affected upo...
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...h are present in very rare species.while,it is to test on that animals because of l...
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Line 3, column 230, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , there
...d to extinct some breed of animals.hence,there are totally disappear from the world.wh...
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Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disappeared'.
Suggestion: disappeared
...reed of animals.hence,there are totally disappear from the world.while,the experiment on ...
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Suggestion: , the
...e totally disappear from the world.while,the experiment on animals which may be lead...
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Suggestion: , i
...ar species of animals. In my conclusion,i reiterate my views that there are some ...
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Line 4, column 18, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...r species of animals. In my conclusion,i reiterate my views that there are some ...
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Line 4, column 186, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: However
...y be lead to extinct particular species.However,there are some necessary test which are...
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Line 4, column 193, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , there
...ad to extinct particular species.However,there are some necessary test which are first...
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Line 4, column 219, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'tests'?
Suggestion: tests
...pecies.However,there are some necessary test which are firstly performed upon the an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, may, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1148.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29032258065 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.51430758942 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 176.041082164 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.433179723502 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 20.2975951904 266% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.5443829666 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 287.0 106.682146367 269% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.25 20.7667163134 261% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296780264958 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.202868818384 0.084324248473 241% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746316207633 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202868818384 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746316207633 0.056905535591 131% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.6 13.0946893788 234% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -0.25 50.2224549098 -0% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.7 11.3001002004 236% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.29 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 9.78957915832 322% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.1190380762 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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