Some people feel that it is necessary to test new medicines on animals,while other people feel that it is not fair on animals and not necessary.
Some people considered that it is essential to test new medicines on animals, while other people believe that it is not essential step to do on animals and it is not fai.I will discuss about both views and give my opinion.
These days many companies provided some new medicines which has firstly tested on animals.However ,it is essential for some experimental bases and which required for some pharmaceutical medicines.The medicines have required some experimental purposes which is first to test on animals.Meanwhile, it has necessary of some experimental bases because of it will not affect upon the humans and this is the reason behind that experiment.
On the other side, there are some factors which has affected upon the animals.there are some animals which are present in very rare species.while, It is to test on that animals because of lead to extinct some breed of animals.Hence, They disappeared from the world.while, the experiment on animals which might lead to extinct particular species of animals.
In my conclusion, I reiterate my views that there are some factors which are badly affected upon the animals because of to test on animals which would be lead to extinct particular species.However, There are some necessary test which has performed upon the animals otherwise it is worse effect upon the humans.
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- Some people feel that it is necessary to test new medicines on animals,while other people feel that it is not fair on animals and not necessary. 56
- Some people feel that it is necessary to test new medicines on animals,while other people feel that it is not fair on animals and not necessary. 56
- Some people feel that it is necessary to test new medicines on animals,while other people feel that it is not fair on animals and not necessary.Discuss both views and give your opinion. 56
- Some people feel that it is necessary to test new medicines on animals,while other people feel that it is not fair on animals and not necessary.Discuss both views and give your opinion. 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1114.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15740740741 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12129066547 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 176.041082164 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453703703704 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 20.2975951904 266% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.0657610229 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 278.5 106.682146367 261% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.0 20.7667163134 260% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297981740602 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.203565475401 0.084324248473 241% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647429781246 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203565475401 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647429781246 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.9 13.0946893788 228% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 8.21 50.2224549098 16% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 11.3001002004 226% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.54 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 9.78957915832 322% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.1190380762 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.