; You are due to start a new job next week, but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your employer including
- your situation
- Your problems
- When you think you can start
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to inform you that unfortunately I won't be able to start working in the agreed date due to some issues that happened to me earlier this week, as I supposed to begin my duty on the may 21th, however, my parents have come from Syria to see me after very long time and they will get back their homes on may 22th.
In fact my parents are visiting Toronto for the first time and they know nothing here. Moreover, they didn't speak english at all. Therefore, I have to drop them at the airport and waiting them until they ride the plane.
Thus, I would be extremely grateful if it possible for me to start my duty on may 23th instead of 21th, and also you can deduct those 2 days from my holiday allowance if you wish.
And finally I hope that my request does not cause you any inconvenience.
Best regards
Bilal.A.Ab
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to inform you t...
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Line 5, column 103, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... they know nothing here. Moreover, they didnt speak english at all. Therefore, I have...
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Line 5, column 221, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...waiting them until they ride the plane. Thus, I would be extremely grateful if i...
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Line 11, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... you any inconvenience. Best regards Bilal.A.Ab
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Line 12, column 7, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...inconvenience. Best regards Bilal.A.Ab
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Line 12, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Ab
...convenience. Best regards Bilal.A.Ab
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...enience. Best regards Bilal.A.Ab
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, i suppose, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 713.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42857142857 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29164771331 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670807453416 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.713127407 44.8134815571 236% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 101.857142857 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7142857143 4.34317383033 293% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206900601626 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746040011706 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837743707709 0.0603063233224 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129893762363 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743637435874 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 70.7449484536 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.