During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.
Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter
remind him when and where you met
tell him what kind of job you are interested in
say why you think you would be suitable for the job
Dear Mr. Rajan
I am James Paul; we had met together in a journey towards Australia from India on August 20. I am writing this letter to provide you the assured response that you had insisted me to do. I am ready to join in one of your esteemed restaurant.
Although I was undertaking my own tiny construction job in my village, I am extremely grateful to work with as in any position. However, I am little keen on to maintenance department as I had in the same field here. Also, I am a good cooker and passionate in making some interesting dishes in my house. So, I don’t mind if I can secure as a cooking staff.
I remember what you had said while in our journey; it is the lack of a supervisor in the maintenance department, so I will be suitable for that space for hundred percent. I have twenty years of working experience in this filed and I had been in a large-scale building industry as a maintenance head. It is the best time to join you because now I am doing in my village after quitting the previous position.
Your sincerely
Ajith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 155, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...o I will be suitable for that space for hundred percent. I have twenty years of working...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 197.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38578680203 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80836846644 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629441624365 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0519890817 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5454545455 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9090909091 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125122007201 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470911943301 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563450103195 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866316914451 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554113786807 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 12.4159519038 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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