Holidays honor people or events. If you could create a new holiday, what person or event would it honor and how would you want people to celebrate it?
Throughout history, holidays have been the principal symbol of country's culture, lifestyle and tradition. Therefore, even today there are numerous types of holiday celebrated around the world to represent their country's tradition and honor the famous ancient people. Thus, in my opinion there should be a new holiday specifically honored to celebrate the birth of the most famous Mongolian warrior and king, Genghis King who unified the Mongol tribes and eventually proclaimed the Great Mongol Empire in 1st of December in 1206. Due to this fact, today's prosperous Mongolia exists the way it is no...
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- Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. 88
- Holidays honor people or events. If you could create a new holiday, what person or event would it honor and how would you want people to celebrate it? 90
- Your school has enough money to purchase either computer for students or books for the library. Which should your school choose to buy- computers or books? 90
- Why do you think some people are attracted to dangerous sports or other dangerous activities? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 83
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Score: 26 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
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