We live in a world of technology these days. While the internet brings with it clear advantages, the problems in terms of control and security of information outweigh the advantages. To what extent do you agree?
From the beginning of the 21st century, the internet played an important role in several areas of development. Though it is
having many advantages, there are some disadvantages
which should
be taken into account. However, in my opinion, these threats do not overshadow the advantages.
Firstly, the internet became an important need in several industries,
organizations, companies and so on. It provided flexibility in arduous and cumbersome jobs. In ancient days it took around
2 to 3 days for a letter to reach its destination but now, it is a
piece of cake for people. Present days people can book tickets online, order food, financial transactions, buy groceries, and several activities can be easily managed by sitting at a place. Moreover, a tremendous increase in online education where an individual can find a colossal number of materials related to a single topic.
On the other hand, the internet is also associated with the privacy and
security of humans. A person's confidentiality is lost when a piece of information is captured by another person therefore, some precautions should be taken before using the internet. Software industries should develop robust software to mitigate security breaches and implement efficient algorithms to avoid hacking computers.
While transferring funds and sharing confidential information one should use
trusted websites moreover, as soon as they complete their work they should clear
the cache data. Additionally, antivirus software should be installed on computers
which can play a vital role in safeguarding computers from malicious attacks.
To sum up, security attacks and privacy of an individual can be protected by using efficient software algorithms and one should take care while using internet without entering into suspicious sites.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, moreover, so, therefore, while, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56834532374 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05963534742 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63309352518 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0113144237 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.571428571 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.38176352705 320% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114972414968 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421214279595 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467372913955 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0427815391529 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408556840696 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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