The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarize the in formation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart depicts reason behind the agricultural area becomes less yield on
the other hand, table shows three affected geographical locations in the world
during the 1990's.
Overall, over-grazing is the major factor for land degradation in the world while
others contribute less percentage. In Europe land degradation is more than other
nations.
First, over-grazing is primary factor while is more than one-third of cause of
land degradation. Because of Deforestation and over-cultivation is about 30% and
28% respectively.However, other contributes only 7%.
Secondly, deforestation in North America and Oceania is 0.2 and 1.7 respectively, however,
Europe is around 10%. There is no over-cultivation in Oceania but Overgrazing
is occupied more percentage around 11.3%.There is no over-cultivation in Oceania but
Overgrazing is occupied more percentage around 11.3%.In Europe over-cultivation is 7.7%
and while in North America is half nearly half of it. Over-grazing is 5.5% in Europe but in
North America is one nearly forth of it.
Finally, Europe is more affected by land degradation which is around 23% and Oceania is 10%
less than Europe, while North america with mere 5%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, second, secondly, so, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1038.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67213114754 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47933414211 2.65546596893 131% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497267759563 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 317.7 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.5679863523 43.030603864 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.333333333 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 3.83414634146 391% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126515605762 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664447493579 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111263459081 0.0843802449381 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0461153833703 0.15604864568 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697062411339 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 11.4140731707 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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