People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems. Should government encourage people to move to regional towns?
These days, it is believed that the dwellers who live in the big cities ought to contend with a huge variety of daily troubles. In this essay, I will elucidate several pressing problems which urban citizens cope with on the daily basis and give my point of view about should they move to small towns.
First of all, it will not deniable that one of the leading obstacles comes from workload. More specifically, because of earnings, people have no choice but sacrificing time and energy for work without relaxation. For that reason, in the long run, people are always in status of extremely high pressure and exhaustion. Secondly, setting down in the centered cities such as Hanoi or Ho Chi Minh City in Vietnam, traffic congestion is something irresistible. Owing to a flock of commuters on the street especially in rush hours, it is likely that citizens are driven into frustration and even easily suffer from several mentality-related sicknesses.
Therefore, I concur that the government need to take concern of population allocation, which means a number of people should be moved to neighboring towns. This probably leads to the mitigation of pressure on not only cities but also the settlers. However, the certain and thorough plan in a long run need to be taken into consideration because allocation in population is conducive to the strong impacts on the growth of the developing cities and people's life.
In conclusion, the developing cities with a minefield of great opportunities people can seize always appeal to the labor. However, to shield urban dwellers from a myriad of physical and mental problems, so necessary is execution on the plan of population reallocation to be conducted.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'obstacles'' or 'obstacle's'?
Suggestion: obstacles'; obstacle's
...ll not deniable that one of the leading obstacles comes from workload. More specifically,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07473309609 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89969426771 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601423487544 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3298919545 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.833333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201457295861 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636130007787 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424620854991 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109434038654 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335629502778 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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