The world of work is rapidly changing and employees cannot depend on having the same work or the same work conditions for life. Discuss the possible causes and suggest ways to prepare for people to work in the future.
The world of employment is shifting at a very fast pace, so that having the same work or the same work conditions is no longer suitable. This is attributed to a host of reasons and the preparations for people are of paramount importance before entering the workforce.
There are several factors that leading to issue. Initially, the customer requires the best version of products which are not only tort-notch but also expensive and high-qualified. For example, rich people often order for supercar and for instant, they want the perfect car with modern engines, beautiful furniture, curve shape… Moreover, job market is becoming extremely competitive because the enterprises need the best and potential employees working for them to compete with those enemies. The purpose is to maximize the productivity and work performance. For instant, the enterprises are willing to pay the salary for people with flying color results and the ability to solve the problem.
A number of measures are taken to discuss the concerns. Firstly, people have to get attempt to collect the experience and knowledge constantly and especially when they are students. Because the world is non-stop developing, it is becoming modernized. Employees must pursue the innovations by learning and they need to equip themselves a lot of skills. In addition, a career motivation can boost the work performance effectively. For example, employees dream of promote or successful, and it motivate them improve themselves, they get efforts to change, as a result, they might become responsible, resourceful, solution-driven…
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'motivates'?
Suggestion: motivates
... dream of promote or successful, and it motivate them improve themselves, they get effor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, for example, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41767068273 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08085793538 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614457831325 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.9711370899 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.769230769 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1538461538 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332362114594 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953548313019 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950698385976 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232941618978 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0989423132968 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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