You have a penfriend living in another country and he/she is curious to know about the major news items in your country .
Briefly describe ONE news story that has been on TV,on the radio, or in the newspapers in your country , and explain why people are interested in it.
Dear John,
I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and to the best of the spirits. I am very upset to share with you one tragic news in our country which you might have also heard. There is a media coverage on this news around the world because it has caused a really terrible destruction.
There is a flood in Assam region of my country, India. Many people have lost their lives due to this. Unexpected heavy rainfall, broken nanda dam and overflow of river Ganga are considered as root cause of this natural disaster. Although, the army had done remarkable job by moving people to nearest safe place thus saving lives of many innocents. Many had lost their family members and many others had lost their house and hard-earned wealth and are living in shelter homes. Indian Government had announced a compensation of Rs five lakhs to each family but the loss of loved one is immeasurable.
Strangely, the news spread like fire in the country due to social media and watsapp group. People are really interested in this news to know about more facts, help the poor victims and they have learnt a lesson to be prepared for such disasters in their regions. I know that you are an active member of Unicef NGO, I want you to share this news with other members of the group and provide needful help to the victims of natural calamity. You can donate directly to the Indian government website, its web address is www.helpfloodvictim.indiagov.com.
Waiting for a positive revert from you soon regarding the financial help.
warm regards
Harry.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John, I hope this letter finds you in radiant ...
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Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s caused a really terrible destruction. There is a flood in Assam region of my c...
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Line 5, column 230, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...as root cause of this natural disaster. Although, the army had done remarkable job by mo...
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Line 5, column 290, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the nearest'.
Suggestion: to the nearest
...ad done remarkable job by moving people to nearest safe place thus saving lives of many in...
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Line 5, column 599, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the loss of loved one is immeasurable. Strangely, the news spread like fire in ...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Warm
... soon regarding the financial help. warm regards Harry.
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Line 11, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing the financial help. warm regards Harry.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, really, regarding, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 937.175257732 138% => OK
No of words: 270.0 206.0 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78518518519 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89258073692 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 127.690721649 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614814814815 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 290.88556701 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7880156691 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1333333333 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53333333333 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181360711844 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554080145025 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572592515105 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103887642008 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655070027733 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.