You have a penfriend living in another country and he/she is curious to know about the major news items in your country .
Briefly describe ONE news story that has been on TV,on the radio, or in the newspapers in your country , and explain why people are interested in it.
Dear Ram,
Thank you for your letter and for inquiring about my parents. They are good. I expect all is well at your end too.
I want to inform you about a burning issue that hit the headlines in India. I am sure you remember the unfortunate ‘Nirbhaya’ incident that took place last month. It has instigated a nationwide outrage attaining the attention of the judiciary system and the government.
The protests continued for about a month leading to severe criticism on the ruling alliance. The Prime Minister Mr Narendra Modi had put the onus over the police and the Supreme Court to convict the criminals and stabilize the extended unrest. The Supreme Court expedited the trails and awarded a sentence to death for the individuals responsible for the aggravated felony.
The decision subsided the public outcry and the government also incorporated additional sections into the law to curtail the potential for sexual harassment and molestation. This move drew considerable domestic and international applause.
Let me know what is latest at your end. Meanwhile, please convey my regards to your parents. I shall be visiting you soon in December
Yours sincerely,
John Gresham
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| 2019-07-30 | harmankaur | 78 | view |
| 2018-11-11 | likiyash | 84 | view |
| 2018-10-10 | N10029 | 89 | view |
| 2018-06-22 | xxx123xx | 81 | view |
| 2016-07-25 | shaan_tech | 68 | view |
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- Some people use technology to take advice for their medical problems rather than seeing to doctor. Why this is so. It is positive or negative development according to you. 84
- Some section of the society feels that grandparents should live together with their children and grandchildren, while others say that older people should be encouraged to live independently.Consider the possible arguments on both sides of this debate and 78
- People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?You should give reasons for your answer using your own 89
- People s shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than any other factors To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... issue that hit the headlines in India. I am sure you remember the unfortunate &a...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nals and stabilize the extended unrest. The Supreme Court expedited the trails and ...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...responsible for the aggravated felony. The decision subsided the public outcry and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21761658031 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98963281579 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.689119170984 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9919902364 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.9285714286 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7857142857 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105471580571 0.216113520407 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0355000317937 0.0766984524023 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363715441056 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0548217526068 0.12726935374 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471997097587 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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