Some people think that children should be taught to be competitive in school. Others, however, say that co-operation and team working skills are more important. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Some believe in teaching competitive skills to students in schools, while others prefer team-working and co-operation skills. Both the views has its own benefits, but in my opinion, all the three skills should be be taught to the school children.
Competitive skills are considered to be more important for survival, and that is the reason for some to stress its importance in teaching it in schools. In today’s world, the oppurtunities for education and livelihood are less and decreasing nevertheless, so it is must for anyone to be highly competitive and outscore others to grab those oppurtunities. School age is the perfect time to prepare children with those competitive skills before they reach adulthood. In japan, some schools dedicate a separate class hour to teach competitive skills and those students of those schools got university admission easily than those from schools that did not. Thus, the need for teaching school children to be competitive is proved to be necessary
However, others believe in upgrading school children with team-work and co-operative skills over other skills for two main reasons. First and foremost is the ability of adapting to the surroundings because most of our children will be working in a group, be it in IT sector or medical field. The other reason is to acquire friends as they grow up. Engaging with others in work harmoniously tends to yield good friendships. School students who were taught to be co-operative formed friends friends easily when they joined college. Therefore, adapting in groups and forming friends require team-work and co-operation skills, which is why they need to be taught in schools.
To conclude, team-work and co-operative skills and competitive skill are weighed separately when it comes to teaching them in schools, but I believe in teaching all those three skills to the school chidren as it would be added benefit for students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23624595469 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89611648677 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498381877023 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.948281224 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.461538462 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404254163889 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159702530176 0.084324248473 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10037877314 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288109330034 0.151304729494 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0922374689699 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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