Write a letter to a friend who is looking for a part time job to support his studies. In your letter- describe the job you found for him/her- explain why this job is good for him/her-say why he/she needs to do to get the job

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Write a letter to a friend who is looking for a part time job to support his studies. In your letter
- describe the job you found for him/her
- explain why this job is good for him/her
-say why he/she needs to do to get the job

Dear Sir,

I am writing to inform you that I have lost my existing ICICI credit visa card (Number:6766877) on 26 July 2019 that was issued by the bank one month ago. I am, Sita Bhardwaj, a prominent customer of your bank, having a salary account(Number: 8798890090).

Recently, I went to the mall to do some purchasing. As I reached to Payment counter, I realized that I have missed the card. I tried to find it out every possible place, but couldn't trace it. Immediately, I blocked the card by connecting with one of your call centers.

I would like to request you to issue the new credit card by replacing the older one. Currently, I am facing a liquidity crunch, therefore, would be highly obliged, if you expedite the process and courier it within two days.

Thanks for the consideration.

Yours Sincerely,

XUF

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear Sir, I am writing to inform you that I have l...
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Suggestion: couldn't
...o find it out every possible place, but couldnt trace it. Immediately, I blocked the ca...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...nnecting with one of your call centers. I would like to request you to issue the...
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Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the consideration. Yours Sincerely, XUF
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 694.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 144.0 206.0 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81944444444 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87546963421 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.715277777778 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 204.3 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3702725977 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.4 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0624274876612 0.216113520407 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0296565130055 0.0766984524023 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339142010047 0.0603063233224 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0506654521436 0.12726935374 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432577147967 0.0580467560999 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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