Issue topic- The best way to teach is praise positive actions than negative one.
teaching always a dependeding on to whom your are teaching.Thus nature of teaching will be depent on the person to whom we are teaching. Prompt calim that during teaching praise the positive action is better than negative one for better results of teaching. According to my opinion teaching will be best when both negative and positive action is praise together. this can be understood by following two examples.
Begin With example of prasie positive action during teaching. consider a student who is in inital stage of learing a new and difficult topic maths. In starting student should be encourage to do basic problem and once student is able to solve those basic problem, student should be motivated for solving more difficulte problem by prasining or rewarding for performing good in basic problems. In this way student can learn and master the topic. In last example when student is prasied for previous performace he or she got motivation and insparation for doing further good which will help student to do better and better in that topic of subject maths.
also, consider a example of athlete who is preparing for a 100 meter running. In starting of the training athlete was taking 15 sec, if from statring only coach of athlete putting pressure for world record of 9 sec in 100 meter running then by seeing the difference between actual results and desired results athlete may be become demotivated and will not perform well. On the other hand, if insted of direct putting a pressure of world record coach can compare his current performace with previous bad performance to movtivate for better results and in this way by prasing athlete can actually make world record.
But, otherway that is teaching by praising a negative action of will also work with many people under some condition and with some ability. considering a same expample athlete preparing for 100 meter of running. Now athlete is participating in qualification matches. under this condition best of athlete can be elicit by putting the consequence of not to qualify, by putting he points realted to style of running which his or her competitor has a better. if athlete has desired and passion of qualification then athlete will work harder and in this way by praisnig negative action also teaching can be done.
In conclsion, praise negative or positive action during teaching depends on the conditon of circumstances and ability of student . if student is initial stage of learning or low energy the to boost student energy and for better learing positive action of student should pe praised .On the other hand, student will ability and passion to get better results, his or her negative action can pe prasied time to time and better and better results can be elicit form student.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, may, so, then, thus, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2300.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 464.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95689655172 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59057765988 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.435344827586 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 721.8 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.38483146067 251% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.713731966 60.3974514979 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.052631579 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4210526316 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63157894737 5.21951772744 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237967012606 0.243740707755 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951353598677 0.0831039109588 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110093928053 0.0758088955206 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147929447021 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108347963493 0.0667264976115 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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