A friend has agreed to stay in your flat (apartment) and look after it while you are away. You want to give your friend some information about the flat.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:
Give information about the flat
Provide any important instructions
Say what he/she should do if there are any problems
Dear Mohan,
Thank you so much for accepting my humble request; without you, it would have a tedious task to find someone faithful. I want to mention some necessary information regarding my flat so that finding my house will be ease for you.
My flat Number is 401 at 7th floor of Vaswani apartment near MG Road, Bengaluru. You won't be having any trouble to find out my flat, as it is one of the famous society, anyways you have google map to get an accurate location.
You need to follow some specific instruction while staying in my flat: you should show up by 12 O'Clock at night; otherwise you have to fill a formality form, collect milk regularly at 6.00 AM, keep the front door always close as recently one robbery case happened and finally please take care of my pet dog.
In case of any emergency situation or any difficulties, either give a ring to me or to the society chief so that you will get help immediately and also never forget to call the police if the situation gets out of control by any means; the police station is just 100 meters away from my apartment.
I will be accompanying you for the first day, and I can't wait to see you here.
Your Friend,
Manas
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mohan, Thank you so much for accepting my humbl...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...gle map to get an accurate location. You need to follow some specific instruc...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ally please take care of my pet dog. In case of any emergency or any difficul...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t 100 meters away from my apartment. I will be accompanying you for the first...
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Line 9, column 57, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...companying you for the first day, and I cant wait to see you here. Your Friend, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, finally, first, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 889.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.445 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40681843935 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.69 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.5541712411 44.8134815571 218% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 127.0 76.5299724578 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5714285714 16.8248392259 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 4.34317383033 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226806931204 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12627285458 0.0766984524023 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821471867863 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106407926075 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289574380988 0.0580467560999 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 8.37731958763 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 70.7449484536 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 7.45979381443 158% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.