You have received a bill from a mobile phone company for international call charges relating to a time when you did not use your phone for international call. Write a letter to company
Complaining about this
Giving your reasons
Asking for bill to be changed
<p style="margin-bottom: 0px; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 11px; line-height: normal; font-family: Helvetica; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); -webkit-text-stroke-width: initial; -webkit-text-stroke-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); min-height: 13px;"><span style="font-kerning: none"></span><br></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 18px; line-height: normal; font-family: "Lucida Grande";">
</p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 18px; line-height: normal; font-family: "Lucida Grande"; -webkit-text-stroke-width: initial; -webkit-text-stroke-color: rgb(51, 51, 51);"><span style="font-kerning: none">Dear Sir/Madam, </span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 18px; line-height: normal; font-family: "Lucida Grande";"><br></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 18px; line-height: normal; font-family: "Lucida Grande"; -webkit-text-stroke-width: initial; -webkit-text-stroke-color: rgb(51, 51, 51); min-height: 21px;"><span style="-webkit-text-stroke-width: initial;">I am writing this email to express my disappointment with October's bill for my cell phone, as it mentioned some pending payments on my line during my annual vacation. </span><br><span style="font-kerning: none"></span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 18px; line-height: normal; font-family: "Lucida Grande";"><br></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 18px; line-height: normal; font-family: "Lucida Grande"; -webkit-text-stroke-width: initial; -webkit-text-stroke-color: rgb(51, 51, 51);"><span style="font-kerning: none">Honestly, I've left my personal mobile at my home between the 29th of September till 1st of November, and I can certainly, assured you that no one used my mobile at that time. However, I shocked when I went into your company in order to pay what I thought that only monthly fees, but the employee informed me that there are several international calls have been made in October, during my holiday. I can send you a copy of my flight details and hotel reservations to prove my absence during that time. </span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 18px; line-height: normal; font-family: "Lucida Grande";"><br></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 18px; line-height: normal; font-family: "Lucida Grande"; -webkit-text-stroke-width: initial; -webkit-text-stroke-color: rgb(51, 51, 51);"><span style="font-kerning: none">I would like therefore to double-check the provided invoice again, and revise it as soon as possible since my mobile line has been suspended due to such error and a plethora of business calls have been missed. </span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 18px; line-height: normal; font-family: "Lucida Grande";"><br></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 18px; line-height: normal; font-family: "Lucida Grande"; -webkit-text-stroke-width: initial; -webkit-text-stroke-color: rgb(51, 51, 51);"><span style="font-kerning: none">I would appreciate your immediate action to this urgent matter. </span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 18px; line-height: normal; font-family: "Lucida Grande";"><br></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 18px; line-height: normal; font-family: "Lucida Grande";">
</p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 18px; line-height: normal; font-family: "Lucida Grande"; -webkit-text-stroke-width: initial; -webkit-text-stroke-color: rgb(51, 51, 51);"><span style="font-kerning: none">Regards </span></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 18px; line-height: normal; font-family: "Lucida Grande";"><span style="-webkit-text-stroke-width: initial; -webkit-text-stroke-color: rgb(51, 51, 51);">Bilal </span><br></p><p style="margin-bottom: 0px; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 18px; line-height: normal; font-family: "Lucida Grande"; -webkit-text-stroke-width: initial; -webkit-text-stroke-color: rgb(51, 51, 51); min-height: 21px;"><span style="font-kerning: none"></span></p>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
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Line 2, column 3025, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...immediate action to this urgent matter.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, honestly, however, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4195.0 937.175257732 448% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 430.0 206.0 209% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 9.75581395349 4.54256449028 215% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 3.78020617076 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 7.70764793361 2.54303337028 303% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 156.0 127.690721649 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.362790697674 0.622605031667 58% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 955.8 290.88556701 329% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.2 1.41237113402 156% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 71.0 16.3608247423 434% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 647.963926465 44.8134815571 1446% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 699.166666667 76.5299724578 914% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 71.6666666667 16.8248392259 426% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 4.34317383033 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0241473963687 0.216113520407 11% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408531320291 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471999446292 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0119282508829 0.12726935374 9% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016869094174 0.0580467560999 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 60.4 8.37731958763 721% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -51.35 70.7449484536 -73% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 26.0 3.82989690722 679% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 38.1 7.45979381443 511% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 40.51 8.71597938144 465% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 7.59969072165 129% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 41.2886597938 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 81.0 8.62886597938 939% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.4 8.54432989691 356% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 8.15463917526 319% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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