Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st Century and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates.
What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions.
Nowadays, the rising of global temperature is an unavoidable disaster faced by the humankind and, the gradual increase of ocean levels has been on frightening status. The main problem would be caused that is the sinking of coastal residential area, as well as the possible solution could be proposed is remodeling seashore building.
First and foremost, the gravest problem triggered by the increase of seawater volume is the flooding of residential area. The difficulty would affect number of residents who inhabit in the coastal area such as loss of property or possession. Moreover, it could also cause a huge national economic misfortune. In the Maldives for instance, the flooding in the coastal zone would have a significant impact on various tourist-spots and, it leads to the decrease of state-income. Furthermore, the incline of salt concentration on the ocean water could seriously affect marine biota such as corals and fish. As a result, numerous species of sea creatures would be extinct and, it would seriously hit the global food sources.
A logical remedy should take into account is the re-design the building in the risked-zone. The government should introduce and push the resident or estate contractors to apply coastal design models in every building in the seaside. This approach proved successfully lowering the damage caused by waves or tides in several Pacific-countries. Also, every government should participate in the action to reduce climate change impact on the sea creature, such as conservation of marine biota and prevent sea pollution. So that, the extinction of ocean creature could be avoided.
To sum up, the increase in global temperature is the most challenging problem faced by people around the world. However, a viable solution could be used to decrease the damage such as re-design building and the participating of every government in the global programs which aim to reduce the impact of global warming.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30225080386 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96898286191 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530546623794 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 12.0 2.52805611222 475% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3267791149 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.933333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0887647110035 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0291774633177 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334024172852 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0633234650751 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327727398517 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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