Some people think that news have no connection to people's life, so then it is a waste of time to read the news in newspaper and watch TV news
While some people argue that news has no relevance to their everyday life, I still believe that receiving information from news media or television still brings a host of benefits to our society.
On the one hand, there are grounds for arguing that following news on TVs or magazines is nothing but waste of time and unrealistic.To begin with, the public is being bombarded by the proliferation of news sources which has little contributory value for their lives. For example, the daily repetitions of reports on gossips and rumors of celebrities, whom we have no common ground to share, makes us become more indifferent or even annoyed. Furthermore, the subliminal messages that the reports want to delivery can be sometimes misunderstood and cause serious consequences for public, especially, for the youngsters. This is now evidenced by the fact that the images of super-thin celebrities in the media have a bad effect on both the perspective and well being of adolescents. Considering being pretty and thin to be the most important thing, teenage girls are the susceptible group most likely to suffer ill-effects from eating disorders.
On the other hand, staying up to date with news still has many advantages. Firstly, reading newspapers and watching TVs are an ideal method to broaden our horizon owing to their diversity of the topics and instantaneous update. News sources not only cover academic fields but also many daily life events happening all around the world, which allows news followers to enrich their both specialist and social knowledge. For instance, without reading or seeing the news, global citizens would never know how devastating an impact Ebola virus disease had in Africa to have a timely precaution. Secondly, TVs and newspapers have been long regarded as a tool of creation and relaxing. Entertainment coverage will keep you informed of all the latest information on your favourite movies or music bands.
In conclusion, although there are both disadvantages and advantages in reading news, I have to reaffirm that acquiring news plays a vital role in people's lives. However, we need to receive it in a sensible and selective way.
- In many countries children are becoming overweight and unhealthy Some people think that it is the government s responsibility To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Is it better to be unemployed in jobs rather than to be employed in jobs even if they don t feel happy or enjoy To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- Some people think that planning for future is a waste of time. They believe it is more important to focus on the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- air travel can only benefit the richest people in the world The ordinary people can get no advanteg with the development of air travel To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- In most countries, prison is an effective solution for the problem. Some people think it is a more effective solution to provide a better education. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15909090909 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87497754213 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.4398797091 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.714285714 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0714285714 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312382745398 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927733676265 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0917989135351 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202282247312 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626329453956 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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