In many countries, women and men are working full time. Is it, therefore, logical for men and women to share household work. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, both women and men are spending maximum time on their jobs. Personally, I agree with the idea that domestic works are
equally divided between two genders.
There are several points to support my point of view. Women feel stress-free if they get help in housework by men. Working in office as well as managing household tasks are an arduous responsibility for ladies. Therefore, an equal distribution of house chores with their partner can reduce the burden of women. They can spend more time for themselves and pursue their hobbies, which can not only offer them a comfortable life but also improve their mental and physical health.
Furthermore, when domestic tasks are shared, it promotes gender equality. In some countries, it is commonly believed that the lion's share of household activities and bringing up children belongs to women. This obsolete prejudice makes it difficult for females to receive further education and go out for work, which gradually makes them voiceless in their own family. Now, dividing housework between sexes is an initial step to break this gender barrier. Consequently, women can stand as many chances in education and career path as men.
In conclusion, although men and women have to cope with many responsibilities at work, I believe that household duties should receive the same concern from both sexes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1139.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20091324201 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69001320734 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.671232876712 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.772435765 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6153846154 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8461538462 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308810587842 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100553858176 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710490587736 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162372834735 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.085496864771 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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