Advances in technology and automation have reduced the need for manual labour.Therefore working hours should be reduced.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Increasingly more smoking has become a serious disease around the universe in 100 years. moreover, the authority has to more focus on public health in other that they should limit or even forbid tobacco production. then, I passionately believe that by health reason, the smoke company should be made illegal. there is a logic motivate for this.
however, tobacco production has become one of the beneficial income of a country such as indonesia. most of indonesia currency is from smoke companies making many cigarettes makers feel confident to creat it more and more. furthermore, the government as if enjoy the revenue from them accordingly, they seem easy to make it is legal. for instance, Sampoerna, one of well-know tobacco production in indonesia having success export commodity across the world where it will indeed obtain incoming throughout the tax. in spite of, the authority should understand that there are a lot of ways to increase economical of the region which is more profitable both societies and the country itself.
the health of the community should be paid more attention by the government order that the welfare of both ordinary people and the organisation itself can be maintained very well. by the legality of tobacco manufacturing, it is a similarity with ignoring the condition of their public by themselves. moreover admittedly, smoke is extremely dangerous for human healthiness, weather passive or active smoker, the ash of it can affect lungs function which probably will impact to death.
in summary, acquiring more currency of some countries is not only from cigarettes company but there are better actions which of course do not disserve all sides of component a country. consequently, they should ban them to extend easily.
- today more people are travelling than ever before.why is this case?what are the benefits of travelingfor travelers 11
- the number of countires, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. discuss both th 73
- Smoking is a major cause of serious illness and death throughout the world today in the interest of public health, government s should ban cigarettes and other tobacco products. do you agree or disagree? 78
- some people think that parents should teach chidren how to be a good member of society. others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.discuss both these views and give your opinion. 73
- at thepresent time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, comparade with the number of older people.do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, as to, for instance, in summary, of course, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20422535211 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8287251852 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605633802817 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6905415686 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.571428571 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5714285714 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0798519670142 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0284915383888 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0259800012621 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0513742584229 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0136249714779 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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