Why do we stay in one place when the world is very big and has lots of places to discover and visit?
In the past, people live just in one place, motherland. They preferred to be near their family and their locals to take care of each other. They were convenience and did not feel short of love much like today. They also had little information about elsewhere in the world, so they did not try to change their life or develop it with a move around the world.
But in recent years, with the frantic pace of growing technology and trading between countries, moving around the world become common and also easier. People leave their local area for several reasons and accept its difficulties for achieving a chance to visit new places, new cultures, and new people. Furthermore, many of them leave their home town to do business activities or make a better economic situation for their family. Lots of students go abroad to study at high-level universities to gain better job opportunities in the future.
On the other hand, move around the world extends your brain ability, helps you to think differently and more experienced. It boosts your knowledge about the world, people, cultures, lifestyles and improve your communication skills, applying a combination of them could change your way in life and turn on the lights in your path.
In Conclusion, I think the world is a book and stay in one place means that you just read one page of it. So travel a lot and discover yourself.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Why
why do we stay in one place when the world ...
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Line 2, column 210, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...not feel short of love much like today. They also had not a lot of information about...
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Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...he world become common and also easier. people leave their local area for several reas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1226.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64393939394 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53803708235 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3552095631 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3076923077 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275160885952 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923008297267 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683007417263 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140033792092 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493971998527 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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