Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity.
What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity?
What solutions can you suggest?
It is undeniable that human are exerting negative impacts on the natural environment and biodiversity on the world. The main reasons and possible remedies are going to be discussed into further detail.
First and foremost, the disappearance of wild animals could be attributed to human. Some loggers poach and smuggle them for money despite the fact that numerous species are being driven to the verge of extinction. In addition, it is the deforestation and the demands for cropland of farmers that trigger the loss of natural habitats of animals. For instance, many people tend to think that rhinos’ horn is extremely beneficial to their health leading to the increase in over hunting them. However, that does not make users stronger but poses a serious threat to the quantity of rhinos.
On the other hand, various solutions need coming up with to address this urgent problem. It is not only the responsibility of the government but also all individuals in society so that people can protect the Earth and our lives. To illustrate, the authority ought to enforce stern laws and implement public educational schemes to raise the awareness of the community. Apart from that, every one follow these laws and participate in saving environment in real life. For example, the government should encourage the huge firms protect the environment and labor forces have to enhance their awareness about the vital role of the Earth.
In conclusion, human being is the key factor contributing to the dying out of species and biodiversity-loss. People from all parts of the world need to take action immediately to keep the environment safe from being destroyed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12177121771 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8610567314 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616236162362 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.9097350038 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.1428571429 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12662947664 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0405743044803 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425048599711 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0785559648742 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419849503548 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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