You are a university student living in on-campus accommodation. You are having some
problems with the internet connection in your room.
Write to the supervisor of your residence. In your letter
Introduce yourself
Inform him / her of the situation
Request that the problem be fixed
Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing to lodge a complaint about internet connection in my room.
My name is mahmoud sajjadi a recently arrived international student living in room number 345 of Central Hall. my room had changed last month since I need to be near the campus.
Recently I found that I couldn't connect to Google's messenger and some of applications didn't work properly. I informed this matter to the building's manager; therefore we noticed that some ports are blocked by the firewall.
I feel it should be fixed immediately, since I need use mentioned programs for my academic purpose.
Your prompt response is greatly appreciated.
Yours faithfully ,
mahmoud sajjadi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...ut internet connection in my room. my name is mahmoud sajjadi a recently arri...
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Line 6, column 112, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...ing in room number 345 of Central Hall. my room had changed last month since I nee...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Recently
... since I need to be near the campus. recently I found that I couldnt connect to Googl...
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Line 8, column 25, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
... the campus. recently I found that I couldnt connect to Googles messenger and some o...
^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 66, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the applications') or simply say ''some applications''.
Suggestion: some of the applications; some applications
...ouldnt connect to Googles messenger and some of applications didnt work properly. I informed this ma...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 87, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...gles messenger and some of applications didnt work properly. I informed this matter t...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 138, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'buildings'' or 'building's'?
Suggestion: buildings'; building's
...properly. I informed this matter to the buildings manager; therfore we noticed that some ...
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Line 16, column 17, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ly aprriciated. Yours faithfully , mahmoud sajjadi
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 582.0 937.175257732 62% => OK
No of words: 110.0 206.0 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29090909091 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.23853184046 3.78020617076 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82294102366 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 127.690721649 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.772727272727 0.622605031667 124% => OK
syllable_count: 170.1 290.88556701 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0688328044 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.75 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.75 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.25 4.34317383033 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153175712738 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688545699297 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490654818351 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0720741555801 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476466205655 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.81 8.71597938144 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.