Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe that there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
people’s opinion differ as to whether or not giving offenders longer prison sentences to reduce crime in our society nowadays. While many people think that putting people in prison for longer periods is the best way to tackle with this. I still believe that there are many other measures to solve the problem.
there are a number of reasons why people might argue that heavy penalty may help decrease crime. firstly, spending a long time in prison provides more opportunities for prisoners to rehabilitate personality. With those, for instance, who have committed a serious offence including harassment abuse, have long time spent in jail in order to be re-educated and discourage them to re-offend crime. Another reason is it will have an impact on thinking of individuals who intend to commit crimes, reflect their own behaviors and educate themselves.
In spite of the above arguments, I support the view that that there are more effective methods to reduce crime rate significantly in the long term. firstly, governments should invest more fundings in educational system. Therefore, citizens would have access to the best learning opportunities. As a result, a large proportion of population is well-educated and filled with civilized thoughts, they are not likely to commit crimes and get themselves into troubles. Secondly, one of the most important factors contribute to reduce people make illegal activities is parental education. The fact that parents play a vital role in development of children and it is possible to help parents be more effective through training and education.
In conclusion, although it might seem sensible for law enforcement agencies to place a person in prison for longer, I personally believe there are better ways of reducing crime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28268551237 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87221991975 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618374558304 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6842412796 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.785714286 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2142857143 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29025086396 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890564971801 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0895529801059 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188255508543 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103452964941 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.