Shopping is now common in many countries
Why is this the case
Is a positive of negative development
CORR<div><br></div><div>Recently, in numerous nations, shopping has become a popular free-time activity for youths. This is due to the problem of peer pressure among them. However, this development has been positively affecting money flow and business in the country; hence, it is being considered to be good</div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div> I believe shopping rate has been increasing among young adults because of pressure among them. Owing to the fact that youths often pressurize each other with fashionable wears and electronic gadgets that they purchase at stores, they always get influenced to compete. For example, most youths imitate online friends and followers who post their new iPhones or fabrics that was purchased at Shoprite mall in Nigeria. Greatly enticed they will be. It is, therefore, clear that shopping has been a competitive activity for young ones to feel relevant</div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div>Fortunately, the rising shopping trend among young generation is beneficial to the financial market. Since more and more youths have been purchasing items, money is now neither hoarded at home nor fixed in term deposit accounts where it may be redundant. Instead, it is being spent. Evidently, the Financial Times newspaper recently reported that there has been increase of about 500 million naira spent since 2018 when shopping rate began to rise. With this ascending financial record, not only will money be circulating in the country, but also will businesses be growing</div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div>In conclusion, shopping is now a preferred leisure activity among youths largely due to competition. Consequently, money flow is more consistent than ever, and business is booming. If this development is encouraged, then there will more growth in the country</div>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 825, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ey will be. It is, therefore, clear that shopping has been a competitive activity...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.88257575758 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.9171552877 2.80592935109 211% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617424242424 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.0591864996 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.461538462 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0893585534211 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367335184221 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364873213865 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893585534211 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.82 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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