consumer durables owned in britain from 1972 to 1983
The table compares the loyalty customers of six separate commodities, namely central heating, television video, vacuum cleaner, refrigerator, washing machine and telephone from 1972 to 1983.
Overall, as can be inferred from the data, there was an upward progression in all items between the year 1972 and 1983 whilst television registered the highest figures out of all 6 groups examined throughout the process.
Looking at the table, television witnessed a noticeable opening number from 93 to 98 in 1972 and 1983 respectively, while vacuum cleaner was the second highest group in this period with a sole exception in the year 1983. In addition, there was a similar pattern in the proportion of refrigerators by 21 in these 8 years. Meanwhile, the figure for central heating increased exponentially from 39 in 1972 to 64 in 1983 and washing machine mirrored the trend above.
In details, the amount of consumer durables in video group jumped from zero in the first seven years to 18 in 1983. A similar vigorous growth was observed in the proportion of dishwasher in the last five years from 3 to 5.
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- In some countries, more and more people are buying imported food rather than buying food produced locally. Why do people buy imported food? What can be done to encourage people to buy locally produced food? 73
- Task 2 International travel is becoming cheaper and countries are opening their doors to more and more tourists Do the advantages of increased tourism outweigh its disadvantages 81
- Some children can learn more efficiently by watching tv Therefore children should watch tv regularly both in school and at home Do you agree or disagree 82
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, second, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01086956522 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8435705011 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2846790782 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.714285714 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2857142857 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2936175639 0.215688989381 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131597992714 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769022486258 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172934355385 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399766028826 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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