A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Although such topics likely will never yield a consensual agreement, a constructive argument animals deserve the same rights as us can lead to thought-provoking discussions. My view is that irrespective of the number of arguments that exists, we must try to preserve them and not use them for our selfish leisure. Through the course of this essay, I shall put forth all the points and calculations to support my viewpoint by considering both the sides of the argument.
To begin with, in ancient day the Hindus worshipped animals, as they consider Cow as their God Mother. However today, we are brutally killing or misusing them to earn monetary benefits. Since, the Human beings feel superior to the other living beings, thus always try to conquer them. To illustrate, people kill Cows to utilize their body parts for different purposes.
Adding to this, all those animals that have the power to remember and feel different behaviors must not be tortured and be left out to thrive independently in their homes. As many research studies have already proved that animals do have strong feelings but they cannot express us because they cannot use the power of speech. For instance, animals are harshly beaten while training them for performance in the Circus.
On the other side, some people also feel that, animals do not have sense of responsibilities or morality and nor do they have understanding of their duties towards the other living beings on this planets. Hence, they are reluctant to relate animals with rights like us. For example, animals like Lion fall prey to their food easily and also hunt for human bodies sometimes in rural areas. But such situations occur rarely.
I see that there is equally potential evidence to support the arguments I have provided and hence my opinion is that animals must not be used to cater our needs; however, I also understand that they are used in many forms of our life to suffice our requirements. But, for a greater ecological cause, I am inclined to believe that, they deserve to be treated like us as part of this big ecosystem.
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- A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Di 79
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 192, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91525423729 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66038712904 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573446327684 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5377124124 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.75 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335382119874 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987526599503 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063218926579 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180020099153 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748243461285 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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