You are looking for summer job. Write a letter to an employer.
-introduce yourself
-explain what type of job you like
-explain your previous experiences and related skills
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to share that I am actively looking for job opportunities in the town to make the most out of the break.
I am a student of Journalism Department at university of Oklahoma. since my childhood I have been into swimming and recently I have secured a silver medal in Inter-university swimming championship.
As there will be summer camp and water sports sessions for the children organized by your company, I was wondering if there is any scope for me to give a hand. I enjoy training young adults for swimming, windsurfing and rafting. In other words, anything related to swimming, young crowd and adventure appeals me.
I have worked as trainer for our university swimming club since last year. if you are interested, then I will be happy to collect a recommendation letter for you from my supervisor. Also, you do not have to worry about the training certificate clearance exam for watersports as I have already cleared it beginning of this year. I may mention that I stayed in a beach side hostel in Thailand during my gap year where I used to volunteer for the local rafting team.
I look forward to hear a positive response from you.
Your sincerely,
Shahla
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 68, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Since
...m Department at university of Oklahoma. since my childhood I have been into swimming ...
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Line 5, column 199, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Inter-university swimming championship. As there will be summer camp and water s...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 76, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...iversity swimming club since last year. if you are interested, then I will be happ...
^^
Line 11, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
... local rafting team. I look forward to hear a positive response from you. Your s...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, so, then, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1003.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82211538462 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94167523997 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644230769231 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1267519046 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5833333333 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181921506554 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061264726373 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431881151277 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924580893069 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420489658389 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.