Nowadays, internet and television have given ordinary people a chance to become famous.
Is this a positive or negative development?
21.century has given opportunity for regular folks to become celebrity. At the moment this is positive trend with negative aspects.
Years ago it was hard to become famous or celebrity for regular people. Only talent or connections was helping through to get your feet between the door. Nowadays it is so much easier as everybody have access to internet and television. It is possible to be famous over a day. For example if person is talented by drawing or singing or is a good comedian, then uploading one public video, shared by lots of people and next day you might have 1 million views and you are famous. Unfortunately, people don't know what are bad sides for being a famous. Influencers or celebrities are in radar 24/7. They are forced to upload storys in Instagram, load videos on YouTube. This might leads to depression and troubles with law, as most famous actors, singers are being caught using drugs or drunk driving and they end up in jail or rehabilitation centre. For example singer Billie Eilish who is only 17 years old have experienced all above.
Being a famous also have a positive sides such as travelling all around the world, meet other people and have new opportunities. Especially newbies who just become famous they can visit different countries and change the world. For example nowadays climate change and plastic overuse is very serious topic, celebrities also helping to reduce plastic
and help organise events. As this is important issue then they become role models to other people too and this an opportunity to help world. Also in Hollywood there are many celebrities and also influencers who become famous because of internet and television, gave their income for charities and poor people. For example Keanue Reeves
gave 70% of his earnings to cancer society, when he played his part in movie 'Matrix'.
In conclusion multimedia is an opportunity to became regular folk to a Hollywood star, but it has positive and negative sides.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96686746988 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6162529926 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581325301205 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.6874650107 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7894736842 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4736842105 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15789473684 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248752235514 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734761019613 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554704215633 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12165994577 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633350144169 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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