You have organised 90th birthday party of your relative and invited elderly guests also. It was a successful party. Write a letter to the hotel manager, to provide the feedback:
In your letter, you should tell:
• when the party was
• why it was successful
• thank for a staff member who was really helpful.
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing to you as an appreciation because your hotel helped me a lot to organise 90th birthday for my grandmother.
We had a reservation last weekend and birthday party itself was on Saturday but we stayed for extra night to rest and had a wonderful day at a beach. Birthday party was a wonderful and food especially dessert was amazing.
We decorated the auditorium with her favourite flowers and also organise a slide show to show early years of her life before she become wonderful mother and grandmother for her grandchildren. She was on tears a lot but we also have a lot of good laughs and had a delightful time together.
I would like to thank Mr Martin Blue who helped me to put up a slide show because I really struggled with it and my computer did not want to show it on a screen. Martin had an excellent solution for these kind of emergencies and it helped me a lot.
Thank you again for a lovely weekend I would recommend your hotel for these kind of events 100%.
Yours faithfully
Jane Green
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-12-06 | spunky slob | 61 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 17, column 200, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...n. Martin had an excellent solution for these kind of emergencies and it helped me a lot. ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 23, column 71, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...eekend I would recommend your hotel for these kind of events 100%. Yours faithfull...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63492063492 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68371346537 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560846560847 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.7108057745 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3333333333 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204565685111 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941579180552 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790137898233 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114498452812 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0753893753365 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.