Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to give my impression of the celebration, which was conducted at your function hall.
On the 11th of December, we have booked the hall number two. And the celebrations took from evening till midnight.
It was a spectacular experience as It was my grandfathers birthday party and most of the guests were elderly since they did not find it unpleasant in any way, I regard it as an achievement.
I was very gratified by your exemplary services, prominently the food was exquisite and has so many options that it was appreciated by all age groups. Furthermore, the personal service was unmatched, as not even a single guest had complained of any kind, the staff was very polite and have assisted subtly.
I wish you continue to have a great reputation in the coming years and thank you for your outstanding services.
Yours faithful,
spunky slob
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 750.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 150.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93290906023 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.7 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4642735583 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.75 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333383058539 0.216113520407 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117820178164 0.0766984524023 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706078213087 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149531173432 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720414561811 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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