In many countries people are living in a throwaway society where things are used for short time and thrown away .
what are the causes of this and what problems does it lead to ?
Due to revolution rapid technology many latest technology equipment products are delivering in the market.this motivates people to buy new appliances and throwaway their old ones or replace them with fashionable stuffs . Common campaigning for "cut, recycle and reuse "in a bid to save the world but we as a nation , have adopted 'replace' as our mantra.There are many problem being lead by this which I shall discuss in the following paragraphs.
the reasons for our becoming disposable society are manifold. First , for better living standards , we wish to have the up to date resources and gadgets. Once new things are acquiring , we refuse to use " unwanted" goods to second-hand shops or just in trash cans . secondly , markets today are flooded with cheap, single use only materials that are more in demand than high-priced quality items .
Furthermore , pollution and filling up the land sites by non biodegradable materials is a great cause of concern . global warming is taking expansions and unless something has to be done for it. this will makes our earth uninhabitable very soon .
Some measures that should be immediately in place to discuss this issue.non recyclable packets , bags , and articles should be restricted as much as possible. environment friendly products should be manufactured and used by people and elements like plastic bags should be totally banned . Every household wastes should be classified as recyclable and non recyclable wastes. Government as well as each play combine efforts to decrease the wastage production and to save the environment.
In conclusion,, no doubt our ignorance and want to have more contributed towards the creation of one use society . Advancement , of technology , globalisation , social, and economic structure have all encourages this trend even faster . Although the time has come for us to step forward and think for the future of the mother planet and put steps to decline the damages by this trend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, as to, in conclusion, no doubt, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33226837061 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98421325335 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648562300319 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4909785424 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.3125 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5625 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169334651647 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477234784027 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301843626005 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0852782652366 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333961137745 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.