with a fast paced modern life, more and more people are turning towards fast food for their main meals? Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In this day and age, when life is going so fast pace, people are having less and less time foe cook themselves and enjoy traditional meals. As a result, they often have to resort to fast foods for their daily diet. However, from my point of view,this type of food has more disadvantages than advantages.
To begin with, processed food contains much more amount of fat, salt and preservatives than a human body should consume in one portion. Consequently, if people use these foods for a long period of time, they are highly likely to develop problems such as diabetes or cardiovascular diseases. In addition, junk food not only contain high volume of artificial substances, sugar, oils but also provide little nutrition value, thus leading to imbalanced eating habits and malnourishment, especially for young children and teenagers.
Second, food safety is another factor that requires careful consideration when choosing ready-made meals. To be more specific, these meals are served in chain restaurants where it is difficult to ensure that everything is hygiene and properly cleaned every day. Additionally, to ensure maximum profit these shops also utilize chemicals and preservatives for overdue ingredients to make hem edible, which can be detrimental to people's health. Even big brands such as KFC were reported to violate food safety regulations in branches all around the world.
Nevertheless, it is undeniable that junk foods are convenient, especially for busy people. In other words, this type of meal can save time for cooking and cleaning, hence giving them more time to work and relax. However, these strong points are not enough to compensate for all the risks of processed foods.
In the light of evidence, the drawbacks of fast foods outweigh the benefits. Therefore, it is advised that people refrain from junk food and prepare food for themselves to guarantee a healthy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, thus, in addition, such as, as a result, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23778501629 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80598427115 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638436482085 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9880406253 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.2 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1333333333 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282890892777 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899057840407 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504444059074 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158508034385 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632692693758 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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