The advent of internet has given birth to digital world where one can do shopping,work , communication etc. through the web without any interaction with humans. Although, it has some benefits, it has some adverse effects on our mental health due to less human interactions are of grave concern.
To begin with, there are some set of people who reckon that internet has changed their way of handling things. Moreover, Internet provides diversity of choice and cost saving plans to customers. Nowadays, shoppers have wide range of varieties and choice of brands from different sellers at one place which saves their time too. For instance, social networking sites provides many facilities an owner to advertise and sell their products by promoting on sites.
In addition to this, people enjoy online shopping 24*7 just by single click which seems better than traditional way of shopping. For example, data collected by shopping website suggests that almost 60% of orders placed in wee hours.
As regard work prospects, internet provides wide range of jobs to youth by the phenomenon outsourcing. It refers to creation of jobs for people in developing countries and sending their work back to developed countries using internet. To exemplify, more than 70% IT professionals in India work online for US based companies. In India also MEESHO named website provides opportunity to earn extra money through internet.
However, the side effects of internet depicts that it has become an addiction for many people. People have immersed deeply into virtual world in such a way that true feelings like care, love, respect became fake. this often leads to stressful situation because online communication cannot provide love and warmth of real relation that is felt through face to face to face interactions. so, online communication rarely provides emotional support that sometimes leads to loneliness and depression.
In conclusion, the internet has proved to be lucrative and time saver in shopping and working fields. However, it has adverse effects on our mental well being as far as communication is concerned.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 82, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , work
... digital world where one can do shopping,work , communication etc. through the web wi...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... their products by promoting on sites. In addition to this, people enjoy online...
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Line 9, column 214, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...s like care, love, respect became fake. this often leads to stressful situation beca...
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Line 9, column 352, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'face to'.
Suggestion: face to
...h of real relation that is felt through face to face to face interactions. so, online communica...
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Line 9, column 387, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...ough face to face to face interactions. so, online communication rarely provides e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3005952381 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73451756498 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616071428571 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.7585570982 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.7368421053 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6842105263 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63157894737 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230549269954 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061596093662 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535604370141 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10239648126 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361213760155 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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