The government should spend money on encouraging children to take part in arts and sports rather than supporting sport activities and artistic performance by general public.
To what extent do you agree or disagre.
Looking at the suggestion that governments ought to allocate more funds to encouraging young minds' participation in the arts and sporting activities rather than those of the entire citizens, I hold firmly that it will not only boost team spirits among children in later life, but further create more and more self-reliant adults. Therefore, this essay will discuss how working with a common goal, in sports, can heighten team spirit and explain how creativity can transform into self-employment.
One thing, which everyone in a team falls in fine for, defines the success of a group - goals - and success is measured only when such targets have been hit. So, running with the end in mind, without missing the tracks, forms a paradigm for every member of a soccer team or organization to either copy or follow, meaning the set-goals must be reached before success can be determined. Sports in early life is not an exception. Many times, although in different occasions, we had watched on the television how 12 year olds cling together planning on how to win an opposing team. This not only provides endless satisfaction when gotten, but most importantly exposes them to the challenges of life and how to reach conquest in one accord. This is how children's active participation in sports can boost team spirits, and leaders should support it.
More like it, but in a different world, is the role of creativity in producing self-made millionaires. We now live in a world of many possibilities, but it is apparent that people who can draw, paint and even make portraits earn a living without having to knock at the doors of any employer. For how clear it is, countries like Ghana had long queued into this plan. Not only Africans, the UK and its neighbours are busy, every year, equipping more and more paint makers. As surprising as it may appear, most of these creators are children who are yet to finish their elementary school studies. Needless to doubt the impact it has had on their respective GPDs. Samchos, a Brazilian, once highlighted how he started being in the arts and attributed it to his leaders, "thanks to my government, I am a self-made millionaire", he said.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 191, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ather than those of the entire citizens, I hold firmly that it will not only boos...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91351351351 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86491549252 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616216216216 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.6414524376 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.857142857 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4285714286 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.35714285714 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0881904232151 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0335985079425 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598451669311 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0642977523267 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03838563719 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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