Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic.
What are the advantage and disadvantage of tourist who visits such places?
Being an explorer or a discoverer, the human always seeks to venture on extreme territories of Earth. The main advantage of this geographic expedition is they give a great amount of knowledge and the main disadvantage is the dangers that unawareness of climatic conditions may bring.
Living in a harsh environment can be challenging as well as exciting for many. When our body is taken out of its natural habitat it boosts our brain. Plus, visiting places like Antarctica is a massive addition to our knowledge. For example, climate change is the biggest environmental problem we are facing today and watching glaciers melting gives first-hand knowledge to us about this issue. In addition, there are a plethora of beauty spots at such locations with a variety of flora and fauna. Also, we get to know about local culture at such locations and their day to day struggle for survival in such conditions.
The major challenge of such visits is alarming weather conditions. Given we have advanced so much in technology we still cannot predict the weather accurately. Also, Nature can be extremely volatile to the extent of eradicating life on earth. About 65 million years ago, the whole Dinosaurs species and every other life on earth became extinct due to weather conditions. Life on earth would have been totally different if those species were still alive. Other examples -hurricane Florence, floods in India, Japan and in many parts of the world. Now, the intensity of these calamities cannot be measured.
In conclusion, visiting places where conditions are difficult can be beneficial to our knowledge and experience but at the same time, it can be dangerous too.
- The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 78
- Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? Has this been a positive or negative development? 78
- It is argued that mobile phones and other electronic devices have no place in the classroom. To what extent you agree or disagree? 73
- All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree? 73
- Currently, there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 79, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...allenging as well as exciting for many. When our body is taken out of its natural ha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, still, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0652173913 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77778302877 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630434782609 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0674281728 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.375 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142000973164 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423856850927 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582852919014 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886444685777 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471355305908 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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