The role of education is to prepare children for the modern world. School should cut art and music out of the curriculum so that children can focus on useful subjects such as information technology. To what extent do you agree?
In the current scenario, an education plays pivotal role for the holistic development of children. Although it is argued by some people that school should remove subjects like art and music from syllabus so that students can concentrate more on other important subjects. I strongly disagree with this view as some recreational subjects not only open door of opportunity but also develop certain indispensable skills which are crucial in the latest world.
To begin with, a group of people who opines to cut down art subjects are oblivious to significance of these subjects in practical life. To be more precise, they consider this as extra burden on beginners and waste of time, instead, the same time could be allocated to learn other important subjects. However, the knowledge about art subjects would broaden horizons of getting valuable jobs. For an example, the students who are expert in music can get better employment in musical industries for bright career. In short, qualification and experience of art and music will undoubtedly help in future.
Additionally, it is an undeniable fact that the basic knowledge about art and music develop skills, such as innovation, thinking out of box and many more. Moreover, the novices could learn about devotion, dedication and determination which certainly will help them to excel in the academic subjects. Consequently, the overall development of student is possible owning to fusion of practical and academic subjects in curriculum. For instance, generally the students who are expert in co-curricular activities are the one who score high in most of academic institutes. Overall, the skills developed by recreational subjects help to gain more knowledge about other important subjects.
In conclusion, an education institutes are of paramount importance for the growth of children in contemporary world. While it is believed by some people to remove art and music to make students more focused on academic subjects, I totally disagree with this view by looking towards its importance to develop skills and opportunities for employment in the long way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 590, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... of art and music will undoubtedly help in future. Additionally, it is an undeniable f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, look, moreover, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, in short, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35435435435 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94877157684 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534534534535 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8729092103 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.866666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216059240495 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769504175251 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545345111484 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142228775886 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458409201392 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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