You missed a flight due to a problem at the airport.
Write a letter to the airline. In your letter
• describe what happened that caused you to miss the flight
• explain how missing your flight affected you
• make it clear what you would like the airline to do
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter with regards to raise a concern of airport authorities.
Let me explain you in more detail. I have reserved my seat in Air Asia on 26th July 2019 from Mumbai to New Delhi. After completing security check, I was waiting to get my boarding pass. When the clerk asked me to show flight ticket, I showed her soft copy. After checking that, she demanded for hard copy and the flight was going to depart in next half an hour. I informed her, carrying flight ticket on mobile or email is permissible and it is mentioned on there website too, but she unheeded me.
Till the time I get hard copy , there was a final call for me to board the airline. I missed my flight and next flight was on next day early morning. I missed the conference in which I was the main speaker.
I would request you to refund the entire amount of my flight ticket and train your staff about rules and regulations.
I will be waiting for your response.
Yours faithfully,
Tim Frank
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 30, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ded me. Till the time I get hard copy , there was a final call for me to board ...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ce in which I was the main speaker. I would request you to refund the entire ...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...our staff about rules and regulations. I will be waiting for your response. Y...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45161290323 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31757574003 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655913978495 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5315189357 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.6923076923 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3076923077 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.538461538462 4.34317383033 12% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231722390361 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755555324268 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622819531592 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115412579837 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548586656055 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.